Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @dummylewis! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Tommy lewis'! We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Good choice of beat! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team