Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @westoakland44! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Caffeine Vs. Nicotine'! The track has meaning. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. The beat is fire, nice choice. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. This track is too short, please share something a bit longer so we can give proper feedback! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

WEST OAKLAND

3 years ago

all these haters they start hating on nicotine Smoke a ciggy my niggy smokes aren't bad for you dont hate on them you should hate caffeine before nicotine besides u know what caffeine does to you brings bunch of fat to your knees you flustered to the point you can't even pick a side stick with your choice of mind I think you will like nicotine so slide through the homie boy PAD its safe for a homie reunion kick back and smoke a ciggy with your dawg my homie spark that ciggy my niggy smoke