Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @ntombizodwamochana! Welcome to our feedback of 'death '! The track has meaning. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. The beat is fire, nice choice. Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. This is too short, please share a longer track for us to review! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Ntombizodwa Mochana

3 years ago

why does feel like like i.m stuck in my own sorrows, why does it feel like motorbike just ran threw huricain people always ask whats the point of of this life but not realizing its hard but it has a point people asking will I still get to heaven if i kill myself