Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @amberwhetstine! Welcome to our feedback of 'self-mutilation rap'! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your stories! Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Dope beat, really works for this track! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Amber Whetstine

3 years ago

why you so angry? why you so mad? why you so dang sad?... All your crying. all your pain, makes you think, force your brain.. Strain yourself Put your feelings on the shelf... Will this ever change? forget about it. Do you believe in God? Do you believe in fame? Dude STOP, get your head in the game! Because nothing's ever going to change if you dont make a change. Its gotta be you. Not me, him or she, You. 'cause this world we live in , I can't force you to do anything, its 2, But I believe in you.. Because you got motivation to ease your frustration, no, no persperation, I'm your inspiration. But you're the creator, be your own innovator. Recreate what you had, leave behind all the sad. Dude dont get mad! Because these feeling of agitation and stress. prevent you from doing your very best. Don't stop until you finish the rest... mark it on your chest. cross you heart and hope for the best...