Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @holy_lad! Welcome to our feedback of 'Bathroom no wipe'! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Good choice of beat! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

holy_lad

3 years ago

I got bars fly me to Mars cant wait to xum inside of a pickle jar big body like a car cant wipe my ass right shit in my pants let spread till it turns red i keep fed and read about how fat your mama is she got truma built like a lama mixed with an iguana muy enojada standing next to her its like a suana