Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @gamirlyles! Thanks for sharing 'Damage (21:44)' with us! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your stories! Dope beat, really works for this track! Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Try improving your recording quality if you can. This is super chill, a real nice vibe. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

G'amir Lyles

3 years ago

I know it’s trash I’m a beginner