Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @kjjackson.4011! Thanks for sharing 'kj' with us! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your stories! Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Dope beat, really works for this track! Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Using less explicit language would be dope as it makes music more accessible. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

King

3 years ago

I'm pretty fire bro check out mines and vote for me click on the tag #bloodymassacrehuh

Kj Jackson

3 years ago

comeing