Lilrage - rapping
Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah. LILRAGE the same
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Perfect 💯
Yo @lilragie! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Lilrage - rapping'! Good choice of beat! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Play around in your studio to find out how best to use different effects. This track is too short, please share something a bit longer so we can give proper feedback! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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