E lekcje
NatiMy first song. 🤙🔥 I'm girl 🙋♀️ My song in Poland : 1.zwrotka Jeat covid19 i siedzimy w domach, Kiedyś siedzieliśmy w ławkach, Gdy była normalna szkoła, Na dwór wychodziliśmy, w szkole się śmieliśmi, A teraz to wygląda tak, Ref. Wstaje wcześnie rano, Włączam kompa do szkoły, Patrzę 8 rano, Ruter już przeciążony, 8 10 chcę przesłać internet, Hotspot mi nie działa, Szukam kabla USB, Patrzę na telefon, A fon ma low'a, I myślę halo, Kiedy normalna szkoła, (kiedy normalna szkoła, i myślę halo kiedy normalna szkoła). 2. zwrotka Nie wiem jak u Was, Ale mnie już boli szyja, Bo jak wszyscy wiemy to siedzenie nam nie sprzyja, Korona wirus, Był, Jest, Ale mija, Od tego siedzenia w domu, już palma mi odbija. My song in English: 1st verse Now is covid19 and we're sitting at home, We used to sit on the benches When there was a normal school We used to go outside, we laughed at school And now it looks like this Ref. I get up early in the morning, I turn on the computer to school I'm looking at 8am Router already overloaded, 8.10 I want to send internet, Hotspot is not working for me I'm looking for a USB cable I'm looking at the phone And the phone is low And I think what is When is normal school? (when is normal school? and I think what is when is normal school?). 2. Verse I don't know how are you But my neck hurts already Because, as we all know, sitting is not conducive to us, Corona virus, Was, Is, But it passes He's already crazy about sitting in the house.
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