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3 years ago

Hey @dazalex! Thanks for sharing 'Federal (13:16)' with us! Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, but they're a little unclear, you may play around with your distance from the mic! Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. Awesome delivery, so many tight flows!! We think this track is awesome and could be a hit!! Submit more music for instant feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Ømøn Rîchíè

3 years ago

Yeah Dear mum,everything you did was worth it All the sacrifices taken when the picture wasn’t perfect I could see it in your face when I was young and all your burdens Are reminders to keep pushing when I’m working on the circuit I remember in Nigeria Delivering paper out the truck when I was sick,going door to door You used to say god got me,I was meant for more And that we was broke cause he fixing what he had in store I remember that momma used to beat my ass Then I would be mad and crying while she worked a back to back Then she’d wake me up and tell me that I’d better get to class And then I graduate she stood up and I saw her clap Mom. We used argue now I know you was right I’ma tell my kid the same to be in before street lights Not to steal,do right ,live,laugh,play,fight And everything pray to god on both knees with closed eyes Everybody’s got a mom,everyone relates to this There’s no way we can repay them for the thing they all did This a message to the queens around the world who go to war And sacrifice to make a better life for all of their kids Tuesday night you would drive me to practice Church on Sunday,midnight masses Pushed me hard,I couldn’t be stagnant Kept me calm despite the madness You cooked and kept me fed Then knelt and prayed beside my bed You’d whisper in my ear And I still hear those words inside my head Mom know best Can’t talk back,can’t disrespect Can’t forget You held me in your stomach despite All the pain,all the stress Can’t neglect Laid the brick to my success And dedicated all your time to Make sure that I did my best Mom,I hope you know this is your song I hope memorize and always sing along I hope you know I know you did your best And every single step you ever took Was to assure I never did no wrong Can’t nobody break the bond It’s infinite and then beyond And when they ask my reason I just say your name as my response My love for you could stretch across A 100 seas and light a galaxy I’m trying to say that can’t nobody ever turn it off Mom.thank you is not enough You the reason that I’m here and why i can’t give up And every single time I fall And every time I’m stuck You call me knowing something’s wrong innately and you pick me up And even when we miles away I promise we’re not out of touch Cause nothing can connect the world the way a loving mother does For all those double shifts,I saw you work,I never saw you fuss And that’s why when I’m tired I keep going cause I know must Work to ensure you get the life you deserve Dear mum,you an angel So again I’m saying,thank you for the memories And time I feel like heaven on earth And while I know I can’t repay you,I just tryna say I’m grateful For your sacrifice and love and always putting me first Mom.i hope that you take these words And never ever have think about or questions your worth For all your pain and your hurt For all your struggles and work Mom.for giving me birth I want say Dear Mom.this a letter from your son Those 3 job you were working,yeah , they probably wasn’t fun All the weight that you were carrying,it probably weighed a ton So I made this song today to finally tell you that are done