Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @nwlk3s5ar1! Welcome to our feedback of 'SWEET (19:29)'! Nice meaning behind the track! Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Good choice of beat! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Adhton

3 years ago

I’ll be chilling but I wanna I wanna I don’t wanna I will be doing in my house and I don’t want to play chilling I’ll be chilling playing my game on the couch chilling I’ll be chilling on my game is sitting down in the old house OK I’m chilling chilling OK I was on my family back out of chilling on the couch with my son were a cherry back I was on my daughter back I was on my god sister back I want a body bag from hell a gay I am going to have an a I want to go to heaven heaven I want to get back to my homey’s I want to get back to my homey’s and I got them from when I got the call is the kids there is a kid I don’t know where to go cause I go no no no there is kids everywhere I can’t get a big scare everywhere others know my home is the die again LOL I want of them but I want a body allows back I want a body bag but I love our loses her number so I am losing a heart all my soul oh yeah