David Powe

3 years ago

Thanks for your criticism and I will try to work on it tysm

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @davidpowe! Waddup - let's take a look at 'NHL Cry'! Nice meaning behind the track! Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. The beat is fire, nice choice. Your vocals are a little high, could you put 'em down a little bit? Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

David Powe

3 years ago

Dissing some bitch nigga name ysv ci