On Me!

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03 Jun 2021

mmm!, my life, our lifeร—2 put it on me, like you know you gat a cause lay it on me, like a nigga you can trust I set my soul free , now am living life on rock gliding through a city like a storm cloud put some feelings in your heart like a borne fire the kinda life that I'm living, its listed under God's gifts, this shit rare, so you gatta praise when you gat it praise who you gat it from, God he be so solid, he the realest ride or die he the illest friend to have, so everyday take a knee thank him for the that breath you gat verse 1 you take that shit granted, but really ask yourself, could you pay, for all air you breathing and right before you blame the wrld for all the problems that you gat just remember, you ain't special everybody gat some problems everybody tryna make they ends meet and I ain't saying that am better I just saw the truth sooner so,just look at all the brighter things cause everybody blessed they own way in different setting, different timing but dont mind that though, cause if it's meant to be, then it will be just keep a smile. and pray to yaweh live your life, leave a legacy behind leave some stories they gonn tell when you gone simply be the change you wanna see, that's it, that's the light verse 2 like why the fuck you pull a glock trigger on a brother he Human too, he gat some family just like you we all fighting for the same shit, cant you see at the end, we all in the soil ,in a box ,in the fire dont really matter who you is, you just like me a nigga with a sack on his back a nigga with a hublot on hi wrist or a nigga in a tie with a family on hi back fuck the colours, the nations, fuck the tribes , fuck the races look around, we all the same

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2 years ago

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

3 years ago

Hi @the_moet! Welcome to our feedback of 'On Me!'! Nice meaning behind the track! Dope beat, really works for this track! Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Great energy, such chill vibes. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

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