Zoey Paige
Josh Hershberger14 Plays
•03 Jun 2021
It's not my place to question but I'm asking God why screaming beating on the door asking why? it doesn't make sense nothing does . I pinch myself I'm not dreaming but it's a nightmare. they say time will heal but the pain just gets more real but that's alright cause I can no longer feel. I got a tattoo of your footprints on my chest perfect match... just like our DNA perfect match they can't take that away. I haven't stopped by your grave I feel bad the only thing I ever wanted... was to be your dad. I thought I'd get to teach you how to ride a bike and your mom could teach you how to be a lady.... little did I know you wouldn't make it past.... baby. I shake my fist at the sky.... hang my head and cry.... they say it helps to talk about it but I'm a quiet person... when it comes to this but maybe this is my version... you were too good for this earth God needed you in his angel band... I just wish I would have got to hold your hand.. Just know you're always in my heart. I will never say goodbye because I'm going to see you again. until then..... love dad.
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It's not my place to question but I'm asking God why screaming beating on the door asking why? it doesn't make sense nothing does . I pinch myself I'm not dreaming but it's a nightmare. they say time will heal but the pain just gets more real but that's alright cause I can no longer feel. I got a tattoo of your footprints on my chest perfect match... just like our DNA perfect match they can't take that away. I haven't stopped by your grave I feel bad the only thing I ever wanted... was to be your dad. I thought I'd get to teach you how to ride a bike and your mom could teach you how to be a lady.... little did I know you wouldn't make it past.... baby. I shake my fist at the sky.... hang my head and cry.... they say it helps to talk about it but I'm a quiet person... when it comes to this but maybe this is my version... you were too good for this earth God needed you in his angel band... I just wish I would have got to hold your hand.. Just know you're always in my heart. I will never say goodbye because I'm going to see you again. until then..... love dad.
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