Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @shortiemarydajalogan! Thanks for sharing 'mary' with us! Nice meaning behind the track! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! The beat is fire, nice choice. Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Shortie Mary Logan

3 years ago

get off my clic