Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @omgliyah123! Welcome to our feedback of 'She is mine'! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. This is too short, please share a longer track for us to review! The beat is fire, nice choice. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

omgliyah123

3 years ago

She is looking fine niga she is mine niga twerking on the desk nigga she is mine she is fine I cannot lie I’m so high I can fly I just need some weed then I die She is mine yes yes yes yes