Summer break
Elam51 Plays
•01 Jun 2021
You smell like some kale and the holy grail. You look like your grandma tripped and fell she’s a snail. Did you fall or is your head just a ball. You are a baby you can barely even crawl. Oh yes I can your head is shaped like a frying pan , you are so bad that your dog is your biggest fan. You are a cranberry your the color of a cherry. You are so lonely like a dog that’s in a prairie. This is not fair but I don’t really care. When I’m in war I just shoot of a flare. You better not cry not even a little sigh. Not to hurt your feelings but you are a smelly guy.
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Hey @elam.5859! Thanks for sharing 'Summer break ' with us! We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. Good choice of beat! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
You smell like some kale and the holy grail. You look like your grandma tripped and fell she’s a snail. Did you fall or is your head just a ball. You are a baby you can barely even crawl. Oh yes I can your head is shaped like a frying pan , you are so bad that your dog is your biggest fan. You are a cranberry your the color of a cherry. You are so lonely like a dog that’s in a prairie. This is not fair but I don’t really care. When I’m in war I just shoot of a flare. You better not cry not even a little sigh. Not to hurt your feelings but you are a smelly guy.
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