king von

2 months ago

COLD 🥶

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @jaykay.6329! Thanks for sharing 'my first by jay kay' with us! We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Nice meaning behind the track! We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Lil kay G

3 years ago

#need some shit and i publisher so i need some ching ching so judge me i dont hold grudges