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3 years ago
Hey @donaldjeanjacques! Thanks for sharing 'Mona Lisa (17:43)' with us! Nice meaning behind the track! Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Good choice of beat! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
3 years ago
Much respect
3 years ago
No problem brudda we making a track when I’m ready
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