Morning
Forty Good7 Plays
•30 May 2021
Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.
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Hi @fortygood! Welcome to our feedback of 'Morning'! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your stories! Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. The beat is fire, nice choice. Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.
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