Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @donjay.873! Welcome to our feedback of 'killa'! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Good choice of beat! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

TMBeatZ

3 years ago

@donjay.873 #TmHorror #LmBullying

Donjay

3 years ago

killa killa killa im a killa hit you with the choppa know im gonna yop uh yes a got my girl shiney as a pearl hit you with that choppa let me do my dance put you in a trance hop out my pants make him do the crip walk let my money talk ay ay