Hi @chrisgrempel!
Welcome to our feedback of 'Yoki (10:26)'!
We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your stories! Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track.
Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? Try improving your recording quality if you can. Practice different effects on different tracks and see how things come out.
Dope delivery, the track flows real nice.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Hi @chrisgrempel! Welcome to our feedback of 'Yoki (10:26)'! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your stories! Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? Try improving your recording quality if you can. Practice different effects on different tracks and see how things come out. Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team