Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @rivreptar! Thanks for sharing 'Ray' with us! Nice meaning behind the track! Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. The beat is fire, nice choice. Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. It would be good to rely less on explicit language. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Riv Reptar

3 years ago

rap/ free style