Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @twinkydlamini! Welcome to our feedback of 'Make It Happen (23:05)'! Your vocals are really clear, that's amazing! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Your style may sound better over a different kind of beat. The recording is solid, everything is clear. Real chill, we love this vibe! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Twinky Dlamini

3 years ago

thanks bro

Twinky Dlamini

3 years ago

Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.