Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @neomsibi! Welcome to our feedback of 'playing on the horse(Neyi Tee)'! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your stories! Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic? Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. This track is too short, please share something a bit longer so we can give proper feedback! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Neo Msibi

3 years ago

i had weird dreams full of branyard animals.Most of them wanted to kill me.The rest wanted food.I must've woken up several times,but what I heard andsaw made no sense on my bed,being spoon-fed something that tasted like buttered popcorn,only it was my girl's. My girl's with curly blonde hair hovered over me, smirking as they scrapped drips off my dollar chain with the spoon fed when they saw my eyes open,they asked, 'What will happen at the summer gold