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Hey @davidtaylor.558! Thanks for sharing 'who wants some' with us! Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, but they're a little unclear, you may play around with your distance from the mic! Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. Awesome delivery, so many tight flows!! We think this track is awesome and could be a hit!! Submit more music for instant feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
yoe...its ya boy DT... man I'm batteling addiction ... time to make my decision ... but im torn and conflicted ... and my mind has been restricted... from the pain thats been inflicted... man this life was unpredicted... my mind is fucking twisted... yeah I'm down with the sickness... leaving all my haters dickless ... and they drowned if I get pissed... fuck around and join my hit list ..... homie no more playin round cause I know I'm bound for greatness... coming for the crown even if I gotta take it.... yoe... my city so reckless... they might kill you for ya necklace.. its get hectic... you'll regret it if I'm ever disrespected ... on the mic im energetic... killin instrumentals like I gotta vindetta... don't get all cenamental homie hold ya head up.... you fuckin with a player .. im the instrumental slayer .... yeah the names David Taylor ... and I grew up in a trailer... used to rob and steal for paper ... now im on my fuckin grind and this music is my savior...and if it wasn't for the haters man I would've gave up dawg im out ill see you later... but I didn't now a few years later ... im killin all these rappers like a fuckin terminator... make em empty out they blatter im the shit no toilet paper... homie you don't want no smoke not today or probably ever ... it don't matter what you say or if it clever... you clown ass fake m.c. and ya head im bout to sever... guess you should known better... yeah I know my flows Insane ... im a g and can't be tamed... I will split ya fuckin head take a peek inside ya brain ... see these words I letem drain... no more dope goes in my viens.. and musics how I cope and deal with this pain... clean and sober now I will never be the same... on this mic you gettin faded but no need to be ashamed... see im David fuckin Taylor and im a beast you just a lame... plus im off the west side so plz stay up out lane ... got some shooters down to ride and they known to bring the pain...homie im just saying... I should probably be ashamed... i been killed your ass now im just playing... somebody get this body off the floor...don't want that shit decaying...
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