She Gravy
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26 May 2021

#BNG #FYF

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3 years ago

Hi @rosshunter.9051! Welcome to our feedback of 'she gravy'! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your stories! Good choice of beat! Your vocals are a bit loud compared to the beat, put 'em down just a little for a perfect mix. Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Try improving your recording quality if you can. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

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