Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @mokieoc2! Waddup - let's take a look at 'by (mokieoc) Jorge armpits stink'! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Good choice of beat! Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Nicely done, you can feel the positivity coming from this track! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

mokieoc 2

3 years ago

this song is a joke