Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @lilhood.621! Welcome to our feedback of 'Swift (21:40)'! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Dope beat, really works for this track! Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Great energy, such chill vibes. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

lilhood.621

3 years ago

Yurr lil hood on this beat yuh don’t play with us we leave you were the most goals I swear about you already Normandeau yeah Mundal you already know I’m getting those handles yeah trundles you’re not gonna handle you already know I can handle this yeah yeah you don’t know the gender of this but I know now please don’t hate on us because we know how to grow we know how to grow don’t know what else will you be in the dust stop on your grave all live in the most you already know where the live versus useless live by the McDonald’s can’t bite us in the parking lot down food is in the spy will shoot you a little but they were in the streets and you know Raven on me don’t play with national whiskey that’s how I treat yeah yeah