Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @jamiehisoire! Waddup - let's take a look at 'bord'! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Dope beat, really works for this track! Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Awesome energy in your delivery, nicely done! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Bobby Kush

3 years ago

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