Jamar Reder

3 years ago

thanks alot... I make beats

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @jamarreder.5847! Waddup - let's take a look at 'positive response from i'! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your stories! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! The beat is fire, nice choice. Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. This track is too short, please share something a bit longer so we can give proper feedback! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Jamar Reder

3 years ago

The time is now lets sit back n release the positive vibes and relax ur mind wondering if you had any questions or concerns please feel free to contact me at any time and I will be there at 3 to get a drink or two and then I will be able to do anything else to get the money,and invest n stack it like a big mack huh ehh me ASAP ya I know you are busy but I will be there n try to get in there like swim wear i kno some people are just like you and I but talking down never been I no hook finessing n be treated like a nobody witch is cool . rather be a nobody then a dumb nobody huh ,, some just quit it medical. insane asylum me huh but this is how i have to be.. so I will be there at 3 to do anything for you and I.. which is really just me back against the wall and the phone number for me is like a night mare to u straight up with the shits fuc