i am scared
Lovely mae45 Plays
•25 May 2021
oh i know that im not perfect my life's a lie, still alive not dead yet i tried to go, run away, get the hell out but i can't, i cant breath i can't live, i can't die and it's a shame what's the point of my existence ? everybody knows that im nothing i tried to smile but i cried and my eyes are not alright, im not fine, i can't fly, my wings are hurt im just a shit im my own enemy what a scary world we're living in depression, don't trust myself cant be alone, i am scared im my own enemy what a scary world we're living in depression, don't trust myself cant be alone, i am scared i am scared, i am scared of what i can do to me i wonder if I'll ever be free or maybe ill die alone without anyone by my side i know ill die being sad being sad, i am scared
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Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉
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