Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @lungelogift! Waddup - let's take a look at 'smile'! Nice meaning behind the track! Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Lungelo Gift

3 years ago

Lily cool they see you doing mess So now they want to be fans Please do it fast Like that way I don't give any smile I DC you and face turn to lime You are make me a bad person in life I'm talking truth I don't wanna lie My Niggas busy busy online You my girlfriend is lucky in life Just look I'm tripping up on my nike Ohh shit they want to join my life Your girlfriend looked on my book Took out the boobs Smile on my bro O shit my day She sucked my dick In front of my bae In front of my dad Maybe I was dead because beach Busy calling up on my name I'm sucking I'm fucking on the ass hole Fuck lot's of pussys tarry But I don't get any sarariy I can buy you a Ferrari