Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @anthonybrown.6210! Welcome to our feedback of 'AfroSamurai (17:30)'! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your stories! Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team