Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @pmello! Thanks for sharing 'Swimming ' with us! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your stories! You've used a cool balance of clean and explicit language. The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Real chill, we love this vibe! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

pmello

3 years ago

Hard drinking and females.