Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi donhawkins! Welcome to our feedback of 'real in the field'! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your narrative rapping! The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recordin' closer to the mic to get a better sound! Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way! You can hear good energy in your delivery, which is great. Thanks again for sharing, it was dope listening to your music! Share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team