Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo jaetwan! Waddup - let's take a look at 'TrapTalk (21:10)'! Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat, keep mixing like that! Nice meaning behind the track, it's dope! Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through! Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound! Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars! Putting a little more energy into how you deliver your lyrics would bring out more of your track's strength! The recordin' is of a good quality, we can hear each individual element. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

jaetwan

3 years ago

What