Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi kinggod.7749! Welcome to our feedback of 'Damage (20:01)'! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your narrative rapping! You've used explicit language in a restrained way, which is dope. Your voice is real quiet in the mix, you should put it way up! Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through! Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way! Unfortunately the recordin' hasn't come out too well, perhaps you could try recordin' in a quieter place. This track has good energy in it that helps the lyrics come through. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

kinggod.7749

3 years ago

Lol