Gangsta (19:45)
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•24 May 2021
Aye we on the top and this is not a prank because I’m first you’re last according to a race and jake Paul took flyod mayweathers hat and now I’m pissed of but life is hard but I will make spending a couple of stalks teaching these kids how to make a couple of racks and I will spend my stalks across the nation and I’m the king of rap and that’s a fact and I can teach y’all that
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Yo dayshawnjones! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Gangsta (19:45)'! Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, nicely done! The vocals sound great, nicely done! Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound! Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way! Putting a little more energy into how you deliver your lyrics would bring out more of your track's strength! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your narrative rapping! Solid recordin', nicely done! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Aye we on the top and this is not a prank because I’m first you’re last according to a race and jake Paul took flyod mayweathers hat and now I’m pissed of but life is hard but I will make spending a couple of stalks teaching these kids how to make a couple of racks and I will spend my stalks across the nation and I’m the king of rap and that’s a fact and I can teach y’all that
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