Tshepo Lehwidi

3 years ago

OukaY will

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo tshepolehwidi! Waddup - let's take a look at 'my girlfriend Angela..'! Nice meaning behind the track, it's dope! Great positivity, listeners like to feel good about 'emselves. Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little! Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recordin' closer to the mic? Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way! The recordin' quality is quite low, it would be great to clean it up, perhaps by being in a quieter place to record. Some more natural charisma put into your delivery would help get your message across to a wider audience! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Tshepo Lehwidi

3 years ago

Angela ke bua ka girlfriend yak hle guys 😂 😂 ke kopa lo stop 🛑 go bua ka ene ke motho wak tog... Eish ngwana wa batho ke batla go mo naya nako e a batla le pelo yak and ka go promise mothowaq le now ke bua ka now yana o Mmagwe ngwanake 💔 please guys bua le ene gore ka mo rata ke bua ka Angela ngwana wa ko Wrenchville. Ke ene ale 1 mo pelo yak ♥️ 🔐 my girlfriend......................, , the beautiful girl 👧🏻 i love you Angela ..