Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey explosivehouseofcomedy! Thanks for sharing 'you' with us! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your narrative rapping! Cool balance between explicit and clean language, it brings out the best in your lyricism. Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound! Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique, new sound! Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars! Unfortunately the recordin' hasn't come out too well, perhaps you could try recordin' in a quieter place. Nicely done, you can feel the positivity coming from this track! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team