Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey yungjay1010! Thanks for sharing 'DEEPOLD (00:16)' with us! Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, nicely done! Dope idea, we enjoyed the storyline of the track! Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out! Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound! Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars! Some more natural charisma put into your delivery would help get your message across to a wider audience! The recordin' is of a good quality, we can hear each individual element. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Yung Jay

3 years ago

Freestyle flow