Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey andregomez.9489! Thanks for sharing 'the Lakers ' with us! Nice meaning behind the track, it's dope! Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix! Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics! The recordin' quality is a little low, make sure you're using earphones or a headset of some sort if you're not already. A little more passion in your delivery would really help get your story across! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

TMBeatZ

3 years ago

@andregomez.9489 #tmHiSatan #TmHorror

Andre Gomez

3 years ago

Smith is it you like the Lakers man they like the Lakers but you said you lied to me you said you hate the Lakers let the man get the f*** out the book notman