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Yo yrfdanlw! Waddup - let's take a look at 'I go I went'! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your narrative rapping! You've used a dope balance of clean and explicit language. Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out! Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way! Unfortunately the recordin' hasn't come out too well, perhaps you could try recordin' in a quieter place. This is a seriously dope track, love the good feelings!! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
@yrfdanlw #tmTrippin
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