Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey juwonjackson! Thanks for sharing 'trying me' with us! Nice meaning behind the track, it's dope! Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix! Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through! Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars! Unfortunately the recordin' hasn't come out too well, perhaps you could try recordin' in a quieter place. This track has good energy in it that helps the lyrics come through. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team