Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo yungkirean! Waddup - let's take a look at 'TrapTalk (21:47)'! Nice meaning behind the track, it's dope! Cool balance between explicit and clean language, it brings out the best in your lyricism. Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little! Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through! Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars! Unfortunately the recordin' hasn't come out too well, perhaps you could try recordin' in a quieter place. Good energy here, it helps bring things together. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Kirean

3 years ago

Ah, ah, ah Ah, ah [Hook] Diggin' up this line if a nigga try me I'm runnin' out of time for my niggas, times freeze Don't these niggas know the price if they ever side me? We on the high road, block it, make the .9 squeeze In them dingers with ringers until we find one We fill them clips to the max tryna get them guys gone And I swear these trenches, they hold me , I see them guys gone Let no bygones get by, I go with my dargs [Verse] Stay down with your niggas grinding Fuck all thеm dark days, I wanna see my niggas shining My mama get a heartache whеn she hear them sirens So I ain't showin' no love, that's why your niggas dyin' So I, I, can't show no love Cah love will get you killed and put you right in a cemetery I'm aimin' out the passenger's side of my best friend's ride You know I'm tryna hop out and squeeze