Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey therealwhitegrizzly! Thanks for sharing 'Don’t Come Take My Shit ' with us! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your narrative rapping! Cool balance between explicit and clean language, it brings out the best in your lyricism. Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little! Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recordin' closer to the mic? Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics! The recordin' quality is quite low, it would be great to clean it up, perhaps by being in a quieter place to record. A little more passion in your delivery would really help get your story across! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team