Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi haydenkennedy.8447! Welcome to our feedback of 'Jupac ft lil doosta that's on my mama'! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your narrative rapping! Cool balance between explicit and clean language, it brings out the best in your lyricism. Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little! Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through! Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound! Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars! The recordin' quality is quite low, it would be great to clean it up, perhaps by being in a quieter place to record. Nicely done, you can feel the positivity coming from this track! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team