Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi boringboyanimations! Welcome to our feedback of 'defeat'! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your narrative rapping! Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix! Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way! Putting a little more energy into how you deliver your lyrics would bring out more of your track's strength! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team