Don Hawkins

3 years ago

thanks for the input much love

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey donhawkins! Thanks for sharing 'Mr. Luck' with us! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your narrative rapping! Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix! Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics! Unfortunately the recordin' hasn't come out too well, perhaps you could try recordin' in a quieter place. Good choice of beat! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team